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I called Brooke last night, and now we have two new chapters of Vector's Challenge up on ff.net today. 16 pages, single-spaced, total between the two chapters.
I think I may wait a couple of days to send them to FAP, as I think that I let Snape get a bit too mushy in the last chapter. Although he was trying to talk Emmy into sex after going to Sunday Mass, and they're not married yet, so he needed to get the emotional big guns out....he finally told her that he loved her. Finally! But maybe this would be more effective if he waited until after the big shoot-out scene on Christmas Eve...
Need to get back to Patent Bar, and will go riding the tandem tonight. I need to get out of this blasted computer chair for a change.
I think I may wait a couple of days to send them to FAP, as I think that I let Snape get a bit too mushy in the last chapter. Although he was trying to talk Emmy into sex after going to Sunday Mass, and they're not married yet, so he needed to get the emotional big guns out....he finally told her that he loved her. Finally! But maybe this would be more effective if he waited until after the big shoot-out scene on Christmas Eve...
Need to get back to Patent Bar, and will go riding the tandem tonight. I need to get out of this blasted computer chair for a change.