Finally got the blasted breakup scene written. It hurt to write it -- I kept wanting to shout, "You two are being idiots!" I wanted Father Sorin to smack both Emmy and Severus upside the head. Sent it to Brooke. But now at least I have my target D laid out, so I can shoot for it and run through A.1, A.2,....C.n, D. And she and I talked through the scene after the breakup where Edmund Vector confronts his idiot son Mike about Mike's role in this mess...